Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26877467-20160925035408/@comment-25181180-20161001121222

This is way too complicated. Due to the complex figure of the current present, the Time Lord eradicates the timeline and sends time back into another galaxy... a galaxy where eveything is still far less advanced and machineries are nowhere to be seen.

Also try writing things no more than 4 paragraphs. It'll be far more complicated in long paragraphs.

Vallström is the third planet in the 'Arcturus' solar system. It has the same temperature as our earth, with huge differences in terms of environment.

A large, flying city titled the Nirvana hovers above the planet. It is the capitol peak of the planet, where elders live. Nirvana is a beautiul city with astounding towers and a grand palace.

The center side of the planet, titled "Volkra", is a much habited place, with various floating islands hovering the land. It's environment consists of a beautiful forested area, floating cities and islands, villages, and jungle animals. The inhabitants were Cavalries ; fearless warriors with advanced offense.

The southern side of the planet, titled "Frostland" is less habited than other areas. Neverending snow rains Frostland and the whole environment consists of Tundras. Snowhounds were the native here. They're canine-resembling creatures that can control ice.

The northern side of the planet, titled "Gorges" is filled with hollow cliffs and demented ravines, where the sun never shines. The environment consists of barren wastelands and high mountains. The inhabitants, Reapers, are hollow and eerie-looking creatures with a dark heart.